[x]

deviantART

 


I'm lost in an ocean,
but not alone.
The water's like crystal
but my body is foul.
Can't keep afloat,
think I might drown,
my body is weak but carries on fighting.
        Close my eyes,
        Surrender myself.


Fire burns my body,
wraps around igniting my prayer,
throw these chains into the furnace,
I feel, I know.


Underwater, hidden treasure,
can't believe that I was so scared.
With each new wave,
I'm getting stronger.
The stronger I get, the deeper I go.
        Close my eyes,
        Feel Your presence
©2006-2009 ~GroovyDelirious
Details
Submitted: April 10, 2006
File Size: 908 bytes
Image Size: 0 bytes
Resolution: 0×0
Comments: 2
Favourites & Collections: 1 [who?]

Views
Total: 38
Today: 0

Downloads
Total: 3
Today: 0

Thumb

Author's Comments

A song me and my best mate steve wrote together two years ago. It's been though several versions and had an alternative chorus but it's since been lost. D'oh.

Its about feeling dry and without God, even though you're actually surrounded by Him. You can't get away, no matter how hard you try. It would be simpler to just surrender yourself.

Its a nice calm accousticy one that gets loud come the chorus.

Hope you like
[x]

Devious Comments

love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0

Comments


yay! love this song! shame u cant hear it!

--
WANT TO DYE YOUR HAIR FUNKY COLOURS?

Get professional results at home with this 'Step-by-Step' guide to bright, alternative hair color.

Click here now:[link]
I really like that, I wish I could hear what it sounds like.

Site Map